Julie Czerneda had time to read the manuscript for Corruption of Power and came back with some very generous comments on it. Just as importantly were a number of suggestions she had for improving it.
A number of other readers have come back with their comments. The response has been very positive.
I’ve come up with some good ideas to help fill out parts of the stories. Most readers have identified a few gaps in the early parts of the story and a very sparse description of the characters.
Notes, notes and more notes. That’s what I’m doing right now. The actual drafting should start in February.
Dispatches from Obscurity 